<html><body><div style="font-family: times new roman,new york,times,serif; font-size: 12pt; color: #000000"><div><br></div><div>Their tag line is --</div><div><br data-mce-bogus="1"></div><div> <!--StartFragment--><span style="color: #14171a; font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, 'Segoe UI', Roboto, Ubuntu, 'Helvetica Neue', sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;" data-mce-style="color: #14171a; font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, 'Segoe UI', Roboto, Ubuntu, 'Helvetica Neue', sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">"Together, we can build a future for everyone."</span><!--EndFragment--><div style="clear: both;" data-mce-style="clear: both;"><br data-mce-bogus="1"></div><div style="clear: both;" data-mce-style="clear: both;"> For truth in advertising, <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-2F7CF7CE6DA0EFB7A97E4EF096DA3A4C" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="what additions we need~what additions I need~what additions they need~what additions it needs" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="what additions to that tag line are needed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">what additions to that tag line are needed</pwa>?</div><div style="clear: both;" data-mce-style="clear: both;">(i.e. what <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-4621634C6FBCBE3510205FDE2F4DA340" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="we need qualifying clauses~I need qualifying clauses~they need qualifying clauses~it needs qualifying clauses" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="qualifying clauses are needed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">qualifying clauses are</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-4621634C6FBCBE3510205FDE2F4DA340" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="we need qualifying clauses~I need qualifying clauses~they need qualifying clauses~it needs qualifying clauses" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="qualifying clauses are needed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> needed</pwa> to <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-15124150BAB53AF46B926EC7A12B03C9" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be added" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">be added</pwa> to the end of that sentence.)</div><div style="clear: both;" data-mce-style="clear: both;"><br data-mce-bogus="1"></div><div style="clear: both;" data-mce-style="clear: both;"> phil</div><div style="clear: both;" data-mce-style="clear: both;"><br data-mce-bogus="1"></div><div style="clear: both;" data-mce-style="clear: both;"> <!--StartFragment--><a href="https://twitter.com/ChanZuckerberg" data-mce-href="https://twitter.com/ChanZuckerberg">https://twitter.com/ChanZuckerberg</a><!--EndFragment--> </div><div style="clear: both;" data-mce-style="clear: both;"><br data-mce-bogus="1"></div><div style="clear: both;" data-mce-style="clear: both;"> </div></div><div><br></div><div data-marker="__SIG_POST__"><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-CA833E402EA2C472C7AE4FC522DC9EF0" data-pwa-rule-id="SPACE_CE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible unnecessary space" data-pwa-suggestions="−" data-pwa-heavy="true" data-pwa-dictionary-word="--" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">--</pwa> <br></div><div><div><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-91E0AE609A8165062B9A64C671C46BC0" data-pwa-rule-id="EM_DASH_DOUBLE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Do you want to use an em-dash here?" data-pwa-suggestions="—" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="--" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">--</pwa><br>Phil Shapiro, pshapiro@his.com<br>http://www.his.com/~pshapiro/<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-2D38518FB1B02B4BAE13C062B9BBCF0C" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: briefbio" data-pwa-suggestions="brief bio" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="briefbio" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">briefbio</pwa>.html<br>http://www.twitter.com/philshapiro<br>http://www.his.com/~pshapiro/stories<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-033F1783E85062E7BA50E4962EDFF865" data-pwa-rule-id="WHITESPACE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="The punctuation mark '.' may require a space after it. Consider adding the space." data-pwa-suggestions=". " data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="." class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">.</pwa>menu.html<br><br>"Wisdom begins with wonder." - Socrates<br>"Learning <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-98294D75C1A08F4AE722E93F92320A8C" data-pwa-rule-id="IVF_CE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Incorrect verb form" data-pwa-suggestions="Happened" data-pwa-heavy="true" data-pwa-dictionary-word="happens" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">happens</pwa> thru gentleness."<br></div><div><span style="color:rgb( 51 , 51 , 51 );font-family:'helvetica neue' , 'helvetica' , 'arial' , sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb( 255 , 255 , 255 )">"We <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-2B95DAC29FFC35F6916FC5EC3FB9F65A" data-pwa-rule-id="CAPITALIZATION_CE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible capitalization mistake" data-pwa-suggestions="Must" data-pwa-heavy="true" data-pwa-dictionary-word="must" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">must</pwa> reinvent a future free of blinders so <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E9ABD0B51BB47AE91FEFFC6DE0A2A92F" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1514" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="that " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">that </pwa>we can choose from real options." David <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-66EE0A37FBF754D661AE3F890D442522" data-pwa-rule-id="END_PUNC" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Missing punctuation" data-pwa-suggestions="Suzuki." data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Suzuki" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Suzuki</pwa></span><br style="color:rgb( 51 , 51 , 51 );font-family:'helvetica neue' , 'helvetica' , 'arial' , sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb( 255 , 255 , 255 )"></div></div></div></body></html>