<html><body><div style="font-family: times new roman,new york,times,serif; font-size: 12pt; color: #000000"><div><br></div><div>Mac's answer is <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-465DBC2267956F4D5606E915F301D2C9" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2818" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Try using a stronger adjective" data-pwa-suggestions="hilarious" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="very funny" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">very funny</pwa> <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-3F02F2FEC6F43DFA2563F2658755A6A9" data-pwa-rule-id="EM_DASH_DOUBLE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Do you want to use an em-dash here?" data-pwa-suggestions="—" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="--" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">--</pwa> and here is mine --</div><div><br data-mce-bogus="1"></div><div><br data-mce-bogus="1"></div><div> <!--StartFragment--><span style="color: #14171a; font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, blinkmacsystemfont, 'segoe ui', roboto, ubuntu, 'helvetica neue', sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;" data-mce-style="color: #14171a; font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, blinkmacsystemfont, 'segoe ui', roboto, ubuntu, 'helvetica neue', sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;"><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E93B68ECDAC47873D9982E1F7CF9CDA2" data-pwa-rule-id="STRUCTURED_PUNCTUATION" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Make sure that all of the quotations and brackets in this paragraph are closed." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word=""" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">"</pwa>Together, we can build a future for everyone and you can kiss your sweet privacy goodbye.</span><!--EndFragment--><div style="clear: both;" data-mce-style="clear: both;"><br data-mce-bogus="1"></div></div><div><span style="color: #14171a; font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, blinkmacsystemfont, 'segoe ui', roboto, ubuntu, 'helvetica neue', sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;" data-mce-style="color: #14171a; font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, blinkmacsystemfont, 'segoe ui', roboto, ubuntu, 'helvetica neue', sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">You'll <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-240BB1AF71B72D260D083DFA92A1E8A1" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be battered" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">be battered</pwa> with relentless and intrusive advertising each and every moment of the day --</span></div><div><span style="color: #14171a; font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, blinkmacsystemfont, 'segoe ui', roboto, ubuntu, 'helvetica neue', sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;" data-mce-style="color: #14171a; font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, blinkmacsystemfont, 'segoe ui', roboto, ubuntu, 'helvetica neue', sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">but it'll be a better future for everyone, but primarily for our company's executives, who wouldn't</span></div><div><span style="color: #14171a; font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, blinkmacsystemfont, 'segoe ui', roboto, ubuntu, 'helvetica neue', sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;" data-mce-style="color: #14171a; font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, blinkmacsystemfont, 'segoe ui', roboto, ubuntu, 'helvetica neue', sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">be able to spell the world irony if you chiseled it in mirror-writing on their forehead." </span></div><div><span style="color: #14171a; font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, blinkmacsystemfont, 'segoe ui', roboto, ubuntu, 'helvetica neue', sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;" data-mce-style="color: #14171a; font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, blinkmacsystemfont, 'segoe ui', roboto, ubuntu, 'helvetica neue', sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;"><br data-mce-bogus="1"></span></div><div><span style="color: #14171a; font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, blinkmacsystemfont, 'segoe ui', roboto, ubuntu, 'helvetica neue', sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;" data-mce-style="color: #14171a; font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, blinkmacsystemfont, 'segoe ui', roboto, ubuntu, 'helvetica neue', sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;"><br data-mce-bogus="1"></span></div><hr id="zwchr" data-marker="__DIVIDER__"><div data-marker="__HEADERS__"><b>From: </b>"<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-596F526D63342BA5C7F17324A7757E1A" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: ipg" data-pwa-suggestions="pig" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="ipg" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">ipg</pwa>-<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-6C394FD5544DD846552FE5310413D74B" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: smz" data-pwa-suggestions="sums~seams~seems" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="smz" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">smz</pwa>" <ipg-smz@netpress.org><br><b>To: </b>"<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-F31AC1D202269D66402329D36E1EB46B" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: ipg" data-pwa-suggestions="pig" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="ipg" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">ipg</pwa>-<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B633941A29B857D0A7795467B87BED80" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: smz" data-pwa-suggestions="sums~seams~seems" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="smz" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">smz</pwa>" <ipg-smz@netpress.org><br><b>Cc: </b>"Mark Brownstein" <IPG@brownstein.com><br><b>Sent: </b>Thursday, January 2, 2020 12:50:34 PM<br><b>Subject: </b>Re: [<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-025ADE42E67CEE198F0F3E6B5D2F0552" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: Ipg" data-pwa-suggestions="pig" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Ipg" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Ipg</pwa>-<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-123770517B59D4B097B1623410916B65" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: smz" data-pwa-suggestions="seems~seams~sums~Sims~Simms" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="smz" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">smz</pwa>] Truth in advertising - Chan Zuckerberg Initiative<br></div><div><br></div><div data-marker="__QUOTED_TEXT__"><p>How about 'a crappy future' or 'a good future'? Just saying 'a
future' doesn't <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D704D8D7B8E02F2564CBEE8E13F23DAC" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2264" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="really " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">really </pwa>say anything. <br>
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<p>Plus - wouldn't there be a future <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-22C07437374A1AAC89B66C217DE5FCC1" data-pwa-rule-id="WHETHER" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Consider shortening this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'." data-pwa-suggestions="whether" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="whether or not" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">whether or not</pwa> this company has
anything to do with it?</p>
<p>How about 'give us a chance, and we'll take your money'?</p>
<p>Or maybe the short-term JC Penney slogan - 'If it fits, you know
it.'? These guys are clueless.<br>
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<div>On 1/2/2020 9:26 AM, Mac McCarthy via
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-6BB8E0EB470BEEE83933FCD11827A355" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: Ipg" data-pwa-suggestions="Pig~Ig~Ing~pg~Pg" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Ipg" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> Ipg</pwa>-<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0EA6E739C47763DE703F4444E214542F" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: smz" data-pwa-suggestions="seems~seams~sums~Sims~Simms" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="smz" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">smz</pwa> wrote:<br>
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<div dir="auto">‘<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-3B93BF76C2B88326A165752A5654A00E" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_548" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: ." data-pwa-suggestions="." data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="For better or worse." class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">For better or worse.</pwa>..’</div>
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<div dir="ltr">On Thu, Jan 2, 2020 at 9:23
AM Phil Shapiro via <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-55B5938EC3BF2B60FD43C2634D345405" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: Ipg" data-pwa-suggestions="Pig~Ig~Ing~pg~Pg" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Ipg" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Ipg</pwa>-<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-26EBA3A1C726EF2EA6A650A1BCF7DE2C" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: smz" data-pwa-suggestions="seems~seams~sums~Sims~smears" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="smz" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">smz</pwa> <<a href="mailto:ipg-smz@netpress.org" target="_blank" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer">ipg-smz@netpress.org</a>>
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-8620FC8EB13CA24931170D0B116D67E4" data-pwa-rule-id="BETTER_PHRASING_CE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Better phrase is possible" data-pwa-suggestions="wrote" data-pwa-heavy="true" data-pwa-dictionary-word="wrote:" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> wrote:</pwa><br>
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<div>Their tag line is --</div>
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<div> <span style="color:#14171a;font-family:'system-ui' , '-apple-system' , 'blinkmacsystemfont' , 'segoe ui' , 'roboto' , 'ubuntu' , 'helvetica neue' , sans-serif;font-size:15px;font-style:normal;font-weight:400;letter-spacing:normal;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:pre-wrap;word-spacing:0px;background-color:#ffffff;display:inline !important;float:none">"Together, we can build a future for everyone."</span>
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<div> For truth in
advertising, <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-152BA34B62E83B061320C0A1201E266F" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="what additions we need~what additions I need~what additions they need~what additions it needs" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="what additions to that tag line are needed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">what additions to that tag line are
needed</pwa>?</div>
<div>(i.e. what <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-F9F8C46002CE5AAEBC53339501F62A6E" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="we need qualifying clauses~I need qualifying clauses~they need qualifying clauses~it needs qualifying clauses" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="qualifying clauses are needed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">qualifying clauses
are needed</pwa> to <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-C3D5AFA00B7FEE1329D884E4C0D0072D" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be added" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">be added</pwa> to the end of that sentence.)</div>
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<div> phil</div>
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<div> <a href="https://twitter.com/ChanZuckerberg" target="_blank" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer">https://twitter.com/ChanZuckerberg</a></div>
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<div>--<br>
Phil Shapiro, <a href="mailto:pshapiro@his.com" target="_blank" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer">pshapiro@his.com</a><br>
<a href="http://www.his.com/~pshapiro/" target="_blank" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer">http://www.his.com/~pshapiro/</a>briefbio.html<br>
<a href="http://www.twitter.com/philshapiro" target="_blank" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer">http://www.twitter.com/philshapiro</a><br>
<a href="http://www.his.com/~pshapiro/stories" target="_blank" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer">http://www.his.com/~pshapiro/stories</a>.menu.html<br>
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"Wisdom begins with wonder." - Socrates<br>
"Learning happens thru gentleness."<br>
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<div><span style="color:rgb( 51 , 51 , 51 );font-family:'neue' 'helvetica' 'arial'">"We
must reinvent a future free of blinders so that we
can choose from real options." David Suzuki</span><br style="color:rgb( 51 , 51 , 51 );font-family:'neue' 'helvetica' 'arial'">
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</div><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-48D73DAF13AB783F1F7E5BD19DD6BAD3" data-pwa-rule-id="EM_DASH_DOUBLE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Do you want to use an em-dash here?" data-pwa-suggestions="—" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="--" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">
--</pwa> <br><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-16D97B0B0C55DB69263DFB60818F32F6" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: Ipg" data-pwa-suggestions="Pig" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Ipg" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">
Ipg</pwa>-<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D62DF79346E4DF1E8DCBB145248A6400" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: smz" data-pwa-suggestions="seems~seams~sums~Sims~smears" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="smz" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">smz</pwa> mailing list<br>
<a href="mailto:Ipg-smz@netpress.org" target="_blank" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer">Ipg-smz@netpress.org</a><br>
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</div><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-FBB0C0C2B7BBAC9537F9D1D541CD3FAE" data-pwa-rule-id="SPACE_CE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible unnecessary space" data-pwa-suggestions="−" data-pwa-heavy="true" data-pwa-dictionary-word="--" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">
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