[Ipg-smz] Copy-editin'/website rebuildin'

[Matt Heusser]

Hello folks -

I'm redoing my company website and I have three little "badges" that each
need 2-4 sentences of copy.  Right now the words are experience, delivery,
and support. Here's what I have so far, curious your thoughts. (I will not
bore you with the copy for the whole site but if someone with copy-writing
experience wants to review what I have for a buck or two, we could talk
about that)

My company does consulting and contracting for either enterprises or
software companies. Mostly we do the improvement stuff - helping them go
faster, building infrastructure, reducing risk. etc. lately we've been
DevOpsy.

Here's what I have now ...

Experience - Of course our consultants have decades of broad, progressive
experience. That's a given. They also write influential papers, serve on
volunteer boards, organize workshops, and give internationally acclaimed
presentations.

Delivery - We focus on outcomes for your organization, not hours in seats
or boxes checked. On a project that means software to customers. On an
engagement it means value to you.

Support - Our work is relationship-based; we view happy customers as our
extended sales force. That makes post-project support a requirement.

-- 
Matthew Heusser,
Managing Director, Excelon Development
http://www.xndev.com

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